EMCEEOBSENE
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OBSENE - Verbal Orgasm (ONE FOR THE SLUTS)
Hey all
Promo track now up on youtube.....
http://youtu.be/RU1KcMSBbmI
ENJOY ;-)
http://www.youtube.com/user/obshizzler
Had an old account under OBSENE but was too smashed and forgot the password years ago... so had to make another account....
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xtothap1
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Is this a piss take or a legit attempt at a track?
\"I know I\'m dope, muthafucker i was there when I wrote this\"
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EMCEEOBSENE
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just a fuck around track I did...
Im yet to record properly at Studio B in sydney....
http://www.youtube.com/user/obshizzler
Had an old account under OBSENE but was too smashed and forgot the password years ago... so had to make another account....
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MADFX
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I dont think he was talking about the audible quality of the track.
#FreeSnape
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xtothap1
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Yeah you probably shouldn't put shit like this up for feedback in the arena. Your lines are weak, delivery is sub par all in all I cringed for the 50
odd seconds I lasted. The recording quality is basically the least of you worries.
If you're just starting thats cool do you, find your niche, but you are a long way from being good
\"I know I\'m dope, muthafucker i was there when I wrote this\"
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EMCEEOBSENE
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tell ya the truth the track was a quick promo, lacks a chorus and better delivery on the punchlines, was recorded probably 4 or plus years ago it's on
my old myspace/obsenerecords account but i thought fuck it, ill chuck it into the forum for some feedback which you guys have given which is good cuz
I aint a cocky cunt who thinks he is good I need the feed back ;-) it needs to be criticised... good or bad.. I got new material Im writting these
days which is good, DJ VAME from Def Wish chucked me two beats to work with, I also got B-DON from Lopez Records who is gonna produce some other stuff
but I need criticism from when I last recorded which was this song and the other song Ready 2 Rumble so I can be sure the next shit I record is
serious and as perfect as it can be... ;-)
Thanks for the feedback
http://www.youtube.com/user/obshizzler
Had an old account under OBSENE but was too smashed and forgot the password years ago... so had to make another account....
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Ouch!
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H8NONTOYZ
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Listen to this guy Ouch! He/She is clearly quite smart.
Droppin Reality Bombs on Y'all Muthaphucka's.
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